developing story/idea

When thinking about the story, I wanted to make sure the idea was currednt and that the characters I create can be related to and can be emotionally attached to. I looked at TV shows such as The Wire, 24, The Shield, Dexter and Third Watch. I also looked at films like Taken, Old Boy, Miniority Report, and Proof of Life. i looked at the storylines each of theses films have and how they use the chacraters and plots to immerse the viewer into the action. With this in mind, I made my game a 1st person type game so you can be the main characteer and see how they see the action unfold. I wanted the player to relate and feel the frustration, and anger of the character when playing this game

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